Sulman, the cover analysis is the strongest, although a little confusing on typography. Be careful as even here you are at times just describing what you see, explain why - so link to audience and genre - you do this at times but you need to do this more throughout. Also link the cover image to the coverline "all on the line" as in phone line. Contents and DPS need more analysis of images, what you see and why and language. Add more detail.
Sulman, the cover analysis is the strongest, although a little confusing on typography. Be careful as even here you are at times just describing what you see, explain why - so link to audience and genre - you do this at times but you need to do this more throughout. Also link the cover image to the coverline "all on the line" as in phone line. Contents and DPS need more analysis of images, what you see and why and language. Add more detail.
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