Monday 29 September 2014
Friday 26 September 2014
Monday 22 September 2014
My evaluation for my draft
Evaluation
Firstly, before starting my draft double page spread I had
to firstly research, learn about journalism skills, InDesign skills, and web
publishing and audience feedback.
Research
During my research stage I had to research about how piracy
has destroyed the music industry. I have carried out mostly primary research by
having a debate and furthermore I have mainly used secondary research such as
websites. An example would be the BBC website and other which are included in
bibliography. I had to use some American statistics as I couldn’t find the
statistics for UK.
Journalism skills
We did not really spend a mas amount of time exploring the
different types of tools a journalist would use however we have covered the
basics such as picking a target audience, tone, language (formal or informal)
gender, age, gratifications and demographics. We also had to pick how we are
going to communicate our message across or how would a magazine or newspaper.
This could be through 1st or 3rd person, language and sentence
structure.
Firstly I have aimed my article at a younger audience
between 16-24 and made for MTV, however I have realised that my article’s
audience changed due to the high end vocabulary used. Then I have adapted my
article for a newspaper article which then led to an older audience, perhaps
26-40.
I have made my article by using both 1st person
and 3rd person to engage with the reader more.
InDesign Skills
InDesign was a really fun desktop publisher to use. I found
it quiet easy as I had experienced with outer publishers which are quiet
similar form the same company, for example Photoshop. InDesign I have used
layers to make my work easy to edit when needed. I have included columns
however I realised that they were to long for a newspaper article, and included
pictures from the internet.
I have used another desktop publisher to help me with
spelling and that was a word-processing such as Microsoft Word. This word
processor helped me with spelling and grammar.
All though I have used many tools I wished I could also have
used tools such as headers, captions and drop caps which may have made my
newspaper article seem easier to read.
Web publisher
I have never use a web publisher so I thought it was going
to be hard/ challenging however once I experiment it with it made it quite easy
and fun to use. I have learned how to use “Blogger” by posting a few blogs;
however I have not used as much as I could of.
Audience feedback
I agree to my feedback as my columns arrangement could of
have been improved. They have also stated that I have kind of slipped away and
not fully typed the article for the audience group which I have chosen. I have
firstly chosen an audience in the range of 16-24 years old, however I realised
that I have used much advanced vocabulary which made it seemed aimed at an
older audience.
4 Targets for my real coursework:
- ill have to stick to a target audience.
- Make sure my layout is appropriate to the article made for, therefore a magazine.
- Have a clear understanding of how present the double spread my target audience. For example appropriate language and pictures.
- Try to improve InDesign skills and use more tools than just the basics.
Wednesday 17 September 2014
Monday 15 September 2014
DRAFT Piracy article
These are drafts, where i realised that is not really matching my target audience so I am going to change it so it appeals to my target audience. This has been also an experiment on InDesign.
Friday 12 September 2014
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